I think you did a great job on this essay, Nick, your essay is very convincing, especially the part when people protest to the gov. to vote at the Tianamen Square. Some words are repeating alot in your essay like decision, revolution. Other than that it's cool. You deserve 28.5/30 :))
Really good essay Nick! I really like your idea that command cause many problems. I suggest you should put some quote. And you shouldn't use a word many times that close to each other like "people".
I think you did a great job on this essay, Nick, your essay is very convincing, especially the part when people protest to the gov. to vote at the Tianamen Square. Some words are repeating alot in your essay like decision, revolution. Other than that it's cool. You deserve 28.5/30 :))
Trả lờiXóaReally good essay Nick! I really like your idea that command cause many problems. I suggest you should put some quote. And you shouldn't use a word many times that close to each other like "people".
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